Local 4th-graders explore trust in FCE essay contest

     Fourth-graders from Holyoke and Haxtun shared their understanding of trustworthiness with FCE Jolly Dozen club members during the organization’s annual essay contest, which announced its winners last week.
     Daniela Castillo of Melanie Wheeler’s class took first place in the contest and was the only winner from Holyoke. On Feb. 13, she was recognized at Holyoke Elementary School by FCE Jolly Dozen members Marianne Sullivan and Peggy Davis, who also presented her with a cash prize.
     All contestants received a graded copy of their essay and a free book. Castillo’s essay will now continue on to the state level of competition.
    
How to be Trustworthy
By Daniela Castillo
     Did you know that doing something as simple as cleaning your room will gain someone’s trust in you? If you don’t know how to be trustworthy, keep reading this essay to find out more information. In this essay, you will learn how to be trustworthy, including being responsible, having and keeping friendships, and taking care of pets.
     First, if you want to have a person’s trust, you must be responsible. You can show responsibility by going to places on time; then people will know to trust you if you are on time. If you are late to a meeting — if you are a parent, maybe a parent-teacher conference — or even maybe your job, no one will ever trust you.
     If a friend lets you borrow something, don’t lose it. Your friend trusts you with their belongings. If you lose something of theirs, it would make them upset, and they won’t ever trust you. If a friend lost something of yours, it would make you upset, or maybe even mad. Well, that is exactly how someone will feel. It will make you feel very guilty.
     Another way to be trustworthy with responsibility is doing something when told. For example, your chores, waking up and getting ready in the morning. Of course, there are more examples, but these are just a few ideas.
     Also, you need to listen to the adults or no one will trust you. Has a kid or adult disrespected you? Did you trust them after that?
     Also, if you don’t have any trust in friendships, it’s not a healthy friendship. Here are some ways you can make an unhealthy friendship healthy. You must be honest. You might have heard the phrase “honesty is the best policy.” Be honest about your opinion and always supportive. If your friend wins in something you are very good at, and you lose, don’t get mad, just say, “I’m happy for you!” Have faith in yourself and other people.

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